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Overall read
The page screams “free listing” and uses bold orange CTAs, but the structure is a maze of similar blocks. The hero is clear enough, yet the rest of the page over-relies on repeating grey panel sections and stacked points, which kills visual hierarchy after the fold. There’s a lot of text in Japanese and not enough micro-copy that makes the benefits instantly scannable. The CTA appears in the hero, and there are a few other CTAs scattered, but the journey to actually sign up is not crisply guided. Overall, it’s functional but not tight or persuasive enough to maximize conversions.
What’s working
What needs work
Bottom line: good basic structure and a strong value proposition on fear of cost, but the page should be re-segmented and simplified to improve readability and CTA momentum.