com.au

Landing Page Analysis

Get started with 1:1 personal training in Greensborough, VIC. Burn fat, build muscle and get stronger with qualified trainers at Start With Health. Book your free strategy session today and start seei

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Generated on:
December 6, 2025
Score:
75/100
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Summary
Detailed Analysis
Page Sections
Open Graph

Summary:

84
Messaging
78
Readability
60
Structure
60
Actionability
74
Design
68
Credibility

This page tries to shout “results” and grab a lead, but the execution is a mess. The hero headline is bold and benefit-focused, but the promise—“guaranteed to rebuild your confidence” with 1:1 training—feels risky and under-explained, which hurts trust. The two-column hero with a framed form is visually heavy and clashes with the right-hand gym image; on mobile it will collapse into a messy stack. The lead-capture CTA is clear, but there are too many CTAs scattered through the page, diluting urgency and confusing users about which action to take first. The trust signals exist (1000+ locals transformed, a Google reviews banner) but they’re not integrated into a cohesive credibility story and the testimonials aren’t immediately visible or verifiable. The content after the hero (FAQs, location, endless sections) becomes visually busy and harder to skim, which undermines the primary objective: book a strategy session. The OG data title/description lines up with Greensborough positioning, but the image and phrasing could be more compelling for clicks and better sized for social previews.

Main Recommendations:
  • Tighten the hero message: drop or clearly qualify the “guaranteed” claim, and integrate a simple, credible guarantee if kept
  • Consolidate CTAs: pick one primary CTA per screen and use secondary CTAs sparingly to avoid choice paralysis
  • Streamline visuals: reduce the framed form’s visual weight, ensure the right image doesn’t compete with the headline, and optimize mobile layout
  • Make social proof immediately scannable: show a couple of real testimonials with names and photos near the hero or in a dedicated credibility block
  • Restructure information architecture: minimize or hide non-essential blocks (like location in copy-heavy sections) to accelerate the lead form process
  • Polish Open Graph: use a benefit-driven OG description and a properly sized image (1200x630) to improve click-throughs